Music plays a salient role in mind soul correlation. Myriad number of studies are performed to study relationship between music and learning in life. Some people believes that listening to music could help them achieve and learn more and easily. While on the other contrary, other curtails that listening to music does not promote learning in any sort. In the forthcoming paragraphs I would like to elaborate my perspectives explaining connections between music and learning.
On the context of the first notion. Learning through music is personally experienced my me, when I listen to a particular genres of music my brain calm down and I am able to concentrate more on what I am reading. According to some of the studies, conducted by prestigious universities It has been published and identified that when children listen to rhymes or they are taught to learn piano or any music instruments during their initial stages of life their IQ levels increases significantly. These children's are more dedicated and could learn much easily they are able to focus more and become a good achiever in future. This phenomenon is also observed in the people with age group between 20 to 40. We have a plethora of music genres such as classical, rock, jazz people can listen to their preference of music depending on mood.
Secondly, It is also been proved that some sort of music which high musical notes intonation could lead to bad public behavior. Although, In most cases the impact of music on brains cognitive skills enhancement in impeccable. Music is benefiting people of all age groups around the globe. Thanks, to the invention of musical instruments, individuals could now sit back and relax.
To sum up, I would like to encapsulate, that advantages of music outweighs its disadvantages propounding to a logical conclusion that people who conjecture that they have a positive impact of music on them they should continue with this practice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, sort of, such as, in most cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 31.9359605911 178% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 322.0 242.827586207 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05279503106 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84316897395 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 139.433497537 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5162073313 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6875 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193590123687 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662357280345 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033175500801 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122136093822 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039149552039 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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