Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. In your own experience, is it a positive trend?
Recently, the phenomenon of constructing large malls in modern cities leads to diminishing the tendency of going to small ones. Although this event is beneficial as it regarded by the substantial numbers of individuals both constructive and positive, others hold opponents views. I am inclined to believe that it can be plus as it could develop some brilliant aspects for its adherents.
From a social standpoint, there are several advantages of building the big shopping centers. These benefits are rooted in the fact of development. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered these merits. Firstly, this idea enhance the fact of concentrations which means by constructing these places in a particular place, people gain the sufficient concentrations in order to purchase all things that they need. Hence, a considerable time is saved. Furthermore, the process of shopping become easier. Due to providing adequate parking lots, settlers have easy access to go there. Moreover, an array of products are available and individuals have a number of options to buy. These places are quite appropriate for the people who live in big nations and have the sedentary lifestyle.
On the one hand, there os no doubt the idea of replacing big shopping centers with the small ones has some opponents. These citizens asserted that the small shopping places can meet some force needs. For instance, if some urgent needs happen, populations will not sufficient time to go to big mall to buy their needs.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the merits of omitting the small shops by building the large ones are far more outweigh their drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to go to big mall to buy their needs. In conclusion, while there are several c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21403508772 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92633261807 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9953039542 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.875 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16009570798 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457445808766 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515294533982 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956546072116 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316952815294 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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