Large shopping malls are superseding small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
With time large shopping malls are popping up in tier two and tier three cities. Many people think that these large shopping malls will replace and supersede small shops, while some don't agree with this view. In this essay, we will discuss and analyze why small shops will never be replaced by large shopping malls. Small shops have their own place in the ecosystem.
Firstly, in small shops the relationship between the owner and customer is more than just transactions. There is a personal touch. For example if somebody goes to a nearby small shop to buy something, they not just buy and come back. People talk to each other, discuss the weather, discuss current affairs, ask about each other's welfare. All these interactions are missing in big malls. The human interaction is least thus no personal touch. Even when somebody goes to a small shop, the shopkeeper is well aware of their customer's needs and choices.
Secondly, the shopping malls need bigger spaces to operate. So, they can't be opened in any corner. For example, people generally plan before going to malls which is generally once a week because they are far away. While small shops are available in every nook and corner. Mostly they are nearer to houses. If somebody needs something on an urgent basis, instead of going to a mall people prefer going to small shops. In small shops, the waiting period is very low and queues are small.
The essay discussed the reasons why small shops will never be replaced by large shopping malls. In my opinion small shops are here to stay because of the experience users get in the shops. It is suggested that small shops have to evolve with time with better discounts and more collection of commodities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81081081081 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27529206499 2.71678728327 84% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550675675676 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6551724138 166% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4528928808 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8095238095 104.977214359 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0952380952 20.9669160288 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 2.91625615764 480% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380599017388 0.242375264174 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104339721425 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826737335442 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241149174758 0.151781067708 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955939232785 0.0609392437508 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 12.6369458128 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 53.1260098522 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.9458128079 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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