In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin. Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society.
The implication of in many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin which is fairly debatable has now gained further attention from numerous arenas. The sizeable influence of this subject has generated controversy over the potential impact of this trend. I believe that I think this all type products is very danger for skin and this will be that because skin is natural think we will never change it discussed before reaching a logical conclusion.
At the outside, there are diverse reason why this subject is considered as vital, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that this all products create some problems like cancer and skin dry fad color and this can be a contributing factor to it contains problems which causes skin cancer effects for instance a research invariable shows that some creams contains toxic chemical which may irrational therefore the negative impact.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that but some creams is well for skin will moreover cream is clean the skin can be addressed with some positive facets as well as there are innumerable facts in favor in favor of that, but the most pre dominant one stems.
Overall conclusion, some cream is well for health or skin but moreover is danger for skin because it contains parables which cause skin cancer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'in favor'.
Suggestion: in favor
... as well as there are innumerable facts in favor in favor of that, but the most pre dominant one ...
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Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tains parables which cause skin cancer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 31.9359605911 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97446808511 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53034458724 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565957446809 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.5024630542 190% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.232168644 50.4703680194 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.833333333 104.977214359 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.1666666667 20.9669160288 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6666666667 7.25397266985 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278924067402 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154818547655 0.0925447433944 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133955304142 0.071462118173 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171188523109 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881973055935 0.0609392437508 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 12.6369458128 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 53.1260098522 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.9458128079 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.3980295567 169% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.5123152709 171% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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