These days it has become a growing trend to see many people choosing to emigrate to other countries. There is a widespread worry that living in a foreign country is dangerous and has many disadvantages. I believe that living in a foreign country has both advantages and disadvantages, and I will explain why in the following paragraphs.
There are a myriad of advantages to living in a foreign country. The most preponderant one is that, people can gain a lot of knowledge, information, and opportunities, in both work sector and education sector. In my experience, people often emigrate to other countries looking for jobs and for educational purposes and by doing so, they can expand their horizon. They can go through various new lifestyles, new customs, new traditions, and different perspectives of a single idea. There is a lot of things one can achieve intellectual wise by travelling.
Another overt facet of my argument is that there are also a lot of downsides in emigrating. Xenophobia has increased rapidly in recent decades, and many people have been harmed by it. The racism, insecurity, and the fear of people from other parts of the world is provoking the natives to do harm against them. In my experience, a lot people have been harmed in foreign countries including my own brother. And also the climate of the emigrating country may not be compatible to us and it will take some time to cope with it.
From what has been discussed above, one can conclude that, irrespective of some downsides, the upsides of emigrating to other countries are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92222222222 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9655197302 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52962962963 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.931034482759 644% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8374225404 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.9285714286 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.64285714286 7.25397266985 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369068384602 0.242375264174 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119640506449 0.0925447433944 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862638299172 0.071462118173 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221069971302 0.151781067708 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918623390694 0.0609392437508 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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