Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
Region affects a person growth and accomplishments, and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. While some people believe that a particular region plays an essential role for a person well-being, others maintain prosperity can only be achieve by wit and determination. This essay will discuss both views in detail with an example.
To begin with, a well-rounded people require a comfortable zone to be successful, and to contribute for their society. Regions are not the only factor, which has optimistic effects in person life for instance, there are many prominent people on Earth who contributed to their society with their skills and knowledge. Moreover, these people do not care about environment or people around them.
From a social standpoint, people have the ability to adjust in multifarious regions. They do not need intimate zone to achieve their dreams and goals. As a tangible example, scientist have proven that most successful people in the world are not from develop countries for instance, Apple current CEO is from India. Therefore, a person knowledge and innovative skills has proven to be beneficial.
In conclusion, every person has different perspective and motivation, but the goal is always the same to be remarkable. In my opinion, there are many essential elements in people life that contribute to success. Consequently, society and other people always benefit from them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[3]
Message: Did you mean 'to intimate'?
Suggestion: to intimate
... multifarious regions. They do not need intimate zone to achieve their dreams and goals....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34375 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96989773732 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602678571429 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.96937123 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0769230769 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221866944408 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736861966519 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570388213043 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128790118539 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372692360306 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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