Medical technology helps to live long life. Is that curse or blessing for society and mankind.
Surely, there has been no time in history where the lives in of people have changed dramatically. A quick reflection on typically day revels Medical technology has been the one of most promised topic in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain whether it is a curse or blessing for over mankind.
To begin with, to become with advancement in medical technology society has discovered the cure of many incurable deadly diseases. For example after some time many people are face death in absence for cancer disease because old times there have no treatment of cancer or malaria. When someone was a cousin. Then also he doesn’t survive long time.
If I talk about the blessing or mankind now in modern technology also now there have all medical treatment like cancer or malaria. Then people enjoy their healthy life style easily. And also get job easily. Its life was healthy with the help of medicine and they survive long time. They are increases the expectancy. Overall I think medicine technology helps to live long life and medicine is blessing the society s mankind. Therefore,its pros are more as incomparsion to its cons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...have no treatment of cancer or malaria. When someone was a cousin. Then also he does...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , its
...lessing the society s mankind. Therefore,its pros are more as incomparsion to its co...
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Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... s mankind. Therefore,its pros are more as incomparsion to its cons.
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Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s are more as incomparsion to its cons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, therefore, for example, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 1207.87684729 81% => OK
No of words: 197.0 242.827586207 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99492385787 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64934746207 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 139.433497537 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593908629442 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3344916548 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2857142857 104.977214359 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0714285714 20.9669160288 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385075732821 0.242375264174 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103901232406 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123248335438 0.071462118173 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225937042715 0.151781067708 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884371736996 0.0609392437508 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 12.6369458128 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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