medical technology is responsible for the human's life expectancy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of appearence the medical technologies and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that low depending on medical technology is highly beneficial, such issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the life expectancy can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to agree with the positive effects of medical technology in human's life. At first, longer life of people results to more population that is a disadvantage due to many issues of it. However, these technologies enhance the hope of people to better living. For example, some people who involved with chronic disease such as cancer could have hope to longer life.
In addition, if the human know has a long life maybe do some irrational things. But, the medical technologies can make better life quality. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MYT University researchers in 2014 has shown that a significant number of aging people can improve their pains and have better life's quality.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that despite some disadvantages with longer age, the benefits of medical technologies are far outweighed its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34246575342 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00171965475 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611872146119 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8796993078 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.363636364 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.25397266985 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227400163211 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918710656086 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568678538151 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129655034201 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470040594658 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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