Modern innovations of antibiotic, computer and airplane, which one is the most important and why?
Nowadays, modern innovations have become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which lead to a moot question “which one is the more important?”. It is a widely held view that computer technology is highly beneficial, whether one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that the computer device plays a vital role in the world of cut-throat competition. To put into consideration, I express several reasons why I support this idea. First and foremost is that the computer has made life so convenient in terms of distance education, remote surgery, simulating a wide variety of programs, and purchasing online as well it has revolutionized the way we live. Secondly, it can be argued that these days computer is being used in the cyber technology to navigate space and other planets. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that we are able to make a video chat or video conference easily among countries. A group of scientists, working at a prestigious university conducted that computer has become an integral part of individuals’ lives and contribute to socio-economic growth.
However, there is no doubt that the computer device provides people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that it is rooted in an extensive range of crimes. A very tangible example to illustrate would be violent games that bring down mental disorders or aggressive behavior. Moreover, using the computer is significantly complicate for the elderly and they prefer to apply traditional methods.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that encouraging people to use the computer in their daily basis must be taken into consideration. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 307.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26058631922 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15805731058 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 139.433497537 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635179153094 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 379.143842365 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9369584674 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.357142857 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173655562503 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478476415557 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562183969693 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987793889999 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842130092648 0.0609392437508 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 55.0591133005 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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