More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
The recent studies have declared that, most of the wild animals are in verge of existinction. The major cause of this is due to more human accumulation which makes the famous quote ' Survival of the fittest' true. Other major reason is more human migration to forests and urbanization and wastes that makes other beings unfit for survival.The details, solutions and causes are discussed in detail.
Firstly, deforestation and migration of humans due to urbanization of forests, creates scarcity of food, shelter and water for other beings. For example, in recent years, several wild animals like Leopard, elephants and other animals entered few houses in search of water during summer. This created a havoc and some of animals have even died due to pouching and smuggling for their skin and tusks.
Secondly, climate changes due to global warming pose a major threat in extinction. In a recent study, it is declared that, certain species of Bengal tigers are very less in numbers and their population is declining every year. Also, due to telecommunications and mobile tower radiations, most of the birds population are declining in recent years.
Thirdly, more disposal of human wastes have created a havoc even in Marine atmosphere, where plastics have been found in most of the aqua animals.
Fourthly, due to global warming and melting of Ice, most of the animals are in verge of extinction in Antarctic regions.
In conclusion, Man must always think about co existing creatures in every step and proper solution to combat the situation must be taken by Government to not disturb wild animals since, the Earth is for all creations not just for Humans. Also, more stringent rules and green taxes must be implemented by every Government and arrest the growth of more plastic wastes by following proper recycling methodologies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ccumulation which makes the famous quote Survival of the fittest true. Other majo...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
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Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the animals') or simply say ''some animals''.
Suggestion: some of the animals; some animals
...uring summer. This created a havoc and some of animals have even died due to pouching and smug...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'birds'' or 'bird's'?
Suggestion: birds'; bird's
...nd mobile tower radiations, most of the birds population are declining in recent year...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15719063545 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71904091941 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3071654338 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.615384615 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238170709821 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801041709717 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532065658117 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111397977911 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760213186059 0.0609392437508 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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