Nowadays, mass media including TV, radio and newspaper have become an essential part of our lives.
What is your opinion?
One of the most controversial issues today relates to how mass media is a crucial element to the general public. I firmly agree with the statement above. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
I feel strongly that media can be the primary source for information. The reason for this is that current events can play an important role in society. In addition, news reports can be a major aspect that relates to modern society these days, so people must pay close attention to it. For example, BBC is undoubtedly the most accepted broadcast station in Australia.
I feel just as convinced that mass media has profound developments on employment opportunities. I often argue that in fact the importance of successful behavior must not be overlooked because career achievements may affect economic growth. Furthermore, news journalists will continue to influence the future of job markets. For instance, Indians would prefer writing newspapers instead of marketing.
In conclusion, the public depends on mass media. It has now been shown that not only can information influence job opportunities, but mass media also can too. It is expected that growth will continue to increase in the future.
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, look, may, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 203.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12315270936 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89399538682 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650246305419 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 379.143842365 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0877814964 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.2857142857 104.977214359 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.9669160288 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0929730652677 0.242375264174 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341355949114 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399594461897 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0591246261272 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240829455611 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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