Personal Development is the base for professional development and advancing in one's career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The importance of Personal Development which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of personal development has now sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend. In the recent years, it is believed by many individual’s that personal growth is the base of one’s professional development also. This essay will discuss the reasons how the personal development of individuals leads to their professional as well as career progress.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons that support the development of one’s personal behaviour prepare the foundations of that individual’s career. More specifically, if a person is zealous in developing their personal behaviour for example, if someone has learned to be discipline on time management since his childhood, then it will be with his through his lifetime and it will be also be helpful for him in his professional front in being disciplined on time management for his professional work. Thus, the personal quality of oneself always strengthen for one’s professional growth.
Furthermore, people start learning several aspects of life since the early age which leads to develop later on in one's professional life. An environment plays a crucial role in building one's characteristics. For instance, an individual's bringing up in a poor society, may equip him with hard work and well discipline towards his work to fulfil his dreams because he has seen poverty around him. In this way, that hard work will go along with him in his professional life as well to get excel in his career.
Taking these points into consideration, from a personal perspective, I am inclined to believe that personal development always good for career growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...agement for his professional work. Thus, the personal quality of oneself always s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42238267148 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26268718345 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545126353791 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7917549969 50.4703680194 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.166666667 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332761031866 0.242375264174 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149470221478 0.0925447433944 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867950572089 0.071462118173 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221831052729 0.151781067708 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828138821348 0.0609392437508 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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