Time spine and with every spine there is a change. Ever since the advancement of technology since 20th century, technology has become widely used by both young and old. This essay is going to discussed the advantages and disadvantages of this technology on young people and reach a conclusion.
Modern technology has help with easy communication, easy job delivery and easy job proficiency. Although, many people believed that technology has bough more harm than good for our present and future generation. Today, it is compulsory for all young children to come to school with i-pad or tablet. Thereby, subjecting children to be computer dependent rather than using their natural hands and brain to be creative.
Another, pivotal aspect of my stance is the inability for children to be able to write with pencil and paper. As a result of constantly teaching them with computer.
To summarize, although, modern gadgets is a necessity but teachers and parent can set time limit for children to use gadget in other for them to be able to use their creative mind for other creativity.
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- A rise in the standard of living in a country seems to only benefits cities rather than rural areas. What problems might this difference cause? How might the problems be reduced? 78
- Students should be required to stay in school until the age of eighteen. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ? Support your point of view with reasons and/or example from your own experience. 69
- Some people believe that government wastes too much money on space exploration and research while there are still many problems on earth. To what extent do yo agree or disagree with the view. 38
- Some people think that study is important to get success,others say that there is no relation between study and success.Discuss both view and give your opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'discuss'
Suggestion: discuss
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...be able to write with pencil and paper. As a result of constantly teaching them wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 1207.87684729 75% => OK
No of words: 180.0 242.827586207 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03333333333 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.92707691288 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75678735908 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 379.143842365 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0444752744 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.25397266985 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180110667189 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580447617428 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062407075285 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103513475463 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722380603607 0.0609392437508 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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