Nowadays, due to the demanding jobs and long working hours, people spend too much time at work, which hardly gives them any time for their personal life. This has elicited a stimulated disputation among the public where the people say that jobs come first, but I sanguinely believe that personal life should also be given the preference as well. This essay will further elaborate reasons to support this notion and then deduce a logical conclusion.
To begin with, Nowadays, companies too much focus is on the higher production and less on the human values. Companies want to increase their profit day by day, hence they require people to spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. I believe that companies need to think more like human and need to take care of their employees.
On the other hand, companies say that when companies income increase it also increase the income of the state, which helps in building the nation. Although it seems ostensibly veridical this is not the case, as the people's private life is equally important.
After analyzing the above facts I would like to recapitulate that people should balance their work and personal life to maintain the harmony within the family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
... when companies income increase it also increase the income of the state, which helps in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, then, well, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91079812207 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32811784275 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582159624413 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7248159696 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.222222222 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.499562451277 0.242375264174 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184826520779 0.0925447433944 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.232284816829 0.071462118173 325% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262319745682 0.151781067708 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175241782958 0.0609392437508 288% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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