People are spending long working hours in the office, consequently, their personal life is affected negatively. It can generate a lot of discussion. This essay will discuss it’s cause and effects, moreover, will recommend few corrective steps also.
Firstly, excessive work pressure in today’s corporate culture requires extra hours to complete the assignment on schedule. Apart from that, advancement of the artificial intelligence and robotics have added the pressure of job insecurities. Therefore, the workers are always under pressure to perform at optimum levels to stay relevant.
Long working schedule not only affects physical and psychological health negatively, it has a negative impact on personal life also. Consequently, more families are separating than ever before because the couple does not have enough time to spend together to keep the bond alive and people are falling sick more frequently.Employees health and performance is the backbone to the success of any organization, therefore, the management should review human resource policies and implement to have better work-life management. Additionally, companies can implement shift model with limited working hours so that employee can handover pending work to the employee in next shift.
In conclusion, in my opinion, the excessive work pressure has affected both peace in personal life and efficiency in professional life, therefore, organizations should review their policies and rectify accordingly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85779816514 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16900773897 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646788990826 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.9695003834 50.4703680194 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.7 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 7.25397266985 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236651404303 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808752870496 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726994185373 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131030703494 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046778499226 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 53.1260098522 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 11.5310837438 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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