Nowadays, the problem of animal extinction reaches great attention. That is why animal conservations have been created in order to save endangered animals. Nevertheless, animal conservations are not only the places for animals but also hunters. Many hunters go to conservations to get pleasure from hunting.
Most of the animal species are under the verge of extinction. Many of the hunters who are trying to save the habitats of animals as they are wiping out from the world whereas some may enjoy the pleasure of hunting. This essay will discuss how hunting can causes leads to the species extinction of animals.
Nowadays, the major problem faced by the animal kingdom is the extinction of the species. The number of species is reducing day by day from the forest due to many reasons such as illegal hunting and deforestation, Animals are taking a good part of keeping the diversity of the Earth, but they are under crisis. Governments are taking a good conservation method to save the animal species in the Earth, whereas some hunters who are more excited in hunting taking the animals away from their kingdom. For example, from the animal conservation forest people go for illegal hunting and killing the animals. These leads to the extinction of animals.
Apart from this violent hunting can lose the animals habitat and Earth diversity. There are so many animal species which are under extinction as they are loosing their pairs from their world. Moreover, the endangered animals can be killed by hunting but all kinds of animals.
In conclusion, extinction of animals can prevented only by making strict policies by the government to save endangered animals. In my opinion illegal hunting should be monitored by the authorities and have to create proper conservation site and habitats for the animals to save animal kingdom and endangered species.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, moreover, so, whereas, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00772200772 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55564625833 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 139.433497537 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447876447876 0.580463131201 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9740490548 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7692307692 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444847166414 0.242375264174 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185784709795 0.0925447433944 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817490998269 0.071462118173 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305878679926 0.151781067708 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881117311279 0.0609392437508 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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