nowadays tv has become an essential part of life medium to spread news and awarness and for some it act as a companion
It is true that television is a prominent electronic device for human beings which delivers plenty of world wide news and it is rampant awareness among people.Some people called that it is idiot bugs which has felt people sluggish and obesity.I tend to ponder that it has both bane and boom.
On the one hand,sometimes people do not know whats happenig around us but when arrival of television to the market ,public has reaveled that whats really happening in our society.For example,crime,news network has delivered reports on crime like robbery,chain snatching and murder by look at television they have been awared of problems and they have been urged to tackled the crimes in real time.moreover,televsion has entertained in many ways which it has relived our strees from work pressurea ,it makes us rejuvanate.Even it is telecasting fittness program to public to keep their body healthier.
On the other hand,although it has beneficial for people,it has darker side as well .For instance,adult who are keep on watching the television for longer hours which it turn them tosedimentery life style sometimes it puts them more obesity and emission of radition from television as result cause our vision power if we keep on watch tv for more hours.
In the conclusion,tv is important part of our life to understand the world news but there shuold be certain confine by watching of programes on the television.At same time we can not curb television.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, really, so, well, for example, for instance, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10878661088 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22217570505 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635983263598 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.5024630542 288% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.304010328 50.4703680194 296% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 305.25 104.977214359 291% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.75 20.9669160288 285% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.75 7.25397266985 341% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.33497536946 525% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12639951535 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080098848528 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351019411052 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080098848528 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351019411052 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.5 12.6369458128 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.59 53.1260098522 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.54236453202 261% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 10.9458128079 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.94827586207 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.3980295567 246% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.5123152709 247% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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