The only effective way to deal with unemployment is to introduce rapid urbanization. How far do you agree to this statement?
Unemployment is the major step-back any nation is facing currently as the number of graduates are increasing but jobs are not. In such a scenario rapid urbanization can provide the youth with a job to survive, but in order for an effective outcome multiple factors need to be taken into consideration. I do agree that rapid urbanization can change the status quo in a certain way.
It is true that moving into cities can help possibly provide job to a person as there are more jobs available when compared with a rural areas. There are more companies and organizations available in a closed quarters making it easier to search for jobs. Moreover cities have better amenities to help a person do what they need like, availability of internet connections which helps the needy to get and work an online job in this current booming age of technology.
The main question that we still need to be asking ourselves is that at what cost are we creating these jobs. Rapid urbanization comes with a lot of challenges with it like reducing farms and increasing pollution. Urbanization can also change the lifestyle and the way a person lives wherein they might be so involved in themselves that they might forget to socialize and interact with others. The lust for money can also increase the competition and force people to opt for unethical means to pull down their peer to step over them resulting in chaos.
Unemployment is an increasing concern for any nation but urbanization does its part in helping resolve the issue. A better approach to achieve better results in curbing this worldwide calamity would be to understand the reason for increasing unemployment and finding solution to the same, because we live a world where there is something for everyone to be a part of only issue is many are not aware of these chances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 314.0 242.827586207 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86305732484 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75120345506 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557324840764 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.6223198866 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.25 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138363690342 0.242375264174 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549088925685 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530847643296 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868262863414 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461744804402 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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