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Although topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on online media and its effect on education can lead to a though-provoking discussion. My view is that irrespective of the numerous arguments that exit in either sides, there are various positive points for this tech-savvy devices as per the following explanation.
The benefits that are associated with digital media are numerous. To commence with, digital media age, which is one of breakthrough phenomenon could share in enhancing knowledge, and encouraging youth to be educated. it is crucial to consider when youngster use their electronic gadgets, they can reach easily the information source in extreme short time. Therefore, the aforementioned argument shows that the governments encourage young people to use this new method of learning through awareness campaigns.
As every coin has two sides, the Online pages Is also associated with a few disadvantages. First and foremost, the individuals probably get addicted, and this can do harm to their personal interaction. As soon as the using of technological advanced equipment is time consuming, their interpersonal skills could be affected. It is a exemplified that the educationalists have to conduct extra circular activities to mitigate the above drawbacks.
Having manifested the above notions, it could be concluded that there is equally potential evidence of the arguments which were illustrated above, and hence my opinion is that the privileges of online resources usage in education outweighed the demerits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'yield'.
Suggestion: will never yield
Although topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, a constructive ...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
..., and encouraging youth to be educated. it is crucial to consider when youngster u...
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Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rsonal skills could be affected. It is a exemplified that the educationalists ha...
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Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
...pinion is that the privileges of online resources usage in education outweighed the demer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61666666667 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24113106115 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.175852436 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.545454545 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 7.25397266985 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.242375264174 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0925447433944 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.071462118173 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151781067708 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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