Recently, the phenomenon of parents' task for their children act and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate, Although contested by many that legal responsibility from parents is highly beneficial, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that being accountable by parents for child operation can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support this statement. At first, many parents maybe prefer to do not have any child due to its difficult responsibilities. However, legal treatment can be beneficial for all members of the society. For example, the rate of crimes such as bullying and theft will be declined by the limited in behavior.
In addition, many parents may dismiss their task about their children, which is a disadvantage for the family. But, many parents would study more about breading heir child that is beneficial for the society. For instance, a recent research conducted by MTV University researchers in 2016 has shown that a significant number of parents in advanced countries enhanced their knowledge about learning better communication to their children to avoid the results of legal impacts.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that despite all difficulties for the parents, the benefits of legal treatments for children's acts for the society is far outweighed its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35269709544 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05896664029 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601659751037 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.5591508945 50.4703680194 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 7.25397266985 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255122256492 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10486645882 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453614622168 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154729993879 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238477061736 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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