In this day and age school used to prepare students for university and teach skills to them for work. Although purpose of
Schools just considered as a way to university, but I disagree with this idea because there are technical schools with practical training to send students for labor-market too.
For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss advantages of this kind of schools.
To begin whit, there are various reason that I support this kind of technical and professional schools.
First and foremost, instantly after graduation, students could get a job, at least 4 years sooner than a graduated from university;
Also, in this period of time, they could become the master in their profession.
In my personal experience, when I started my first job as a building mapper, I was just 17 years old.
Secondly, to get an education degree, the student has to pass a term in real space of job related with their field of study andThey could gain very useful experiences in this term. While in the university, dedicated time for practical lessons is less than theoretical and academic lessons.
For example, a recent scientific research conducted with Tehran University researchers shown that achievement in job for those who studied in practical-schools is
Far than the educated people of the university.
In conclusion, there are several compelling reasons with advantages of preparation for work by schools.my personal sentiment is that by studying in practical-schools, people can save the further time of their life and learn arts and technics in young age to reach to a good job position.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, at least, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98665295018 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594696969697 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0802581433 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.3 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25579888026 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106105291113 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617778481596 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100226505773 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578390095672 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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