In this days, the conception of illiterate is not those who cannot read and write, since the 21st century. The illiterate people are who do not learn about the new style of communication and business. For the purpose of this essay, I will analyze the meaning of this statement.
To begin with, there are various reasons to dismiss the understanding of illiterate as a person who can not just read and write. At first, although, positively, the base of literacy is the ability of reading and writing, they are not the end of learning. reading and writing are vital to learning the modern methods of connection in the advanced world. For example, learning to work with computer and communication with internet tools such as social networks are needs for literates people.
In addition, while the businessmen work with traditional methods of trade, they can not prosper in their business. knowing the modern business is an advantage for any of the businessman. the internet and its tools are the base of the new style of trading. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2016 shows that a significant number of prospered companies in the world turned up to electronic commerce and using the internet tools such as social networks and website.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about the vision of illiterate of the 21st century, I profoundly believe that the illiterate are who that cannot contact and also trade with modern methods appeared in the current century.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06172839506 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78424183112 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522633744856 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2025472863 50.4703680194 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.818181818 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.25397266985 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174716509195 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713413133818 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855625772351 0.071462118173 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115311884863 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865626924947 0.0609392437508 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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