In this day and age, the environmental issues can only be solved by governmental power because these problems are very big for individual management. the government can change the situation with new environmental laws. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why I agree with this statement.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support this statement as a right viewpoint. At first, although, the government themselves are negative impacts in environmental pollution, they can help to solve the problem by legislation. Every day, we are witnessing that many companies and large factories are destroying the natural resources by their illegal works. For example, there are many chemical factories that infect the rivers and underground waters by their wastewater and only the government can stop them.
In addition, the greenhouse gases are one another of environmental issues that produced by cars. The greenhouse gases are the main reason for global warming that it is very harmful to our planet. By providing facilities and making culture, the governments can help to reduce producing this gases. For instance, a recent research conducted by MTY University researchers in 2014 shows that a significant number of governments in advanced countries have encouraged their people to travel with public transport and smoothed the ways of reaching to metro and bus.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about individual contributions in the field of
environmental problems, my personal sentiment is that the real changed can be achieved the governments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42741935484 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03824691703 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608870967742 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9095215382 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.166666667 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276892762598 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100941258628 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681928949498 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14768232725 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885542017851 0.0609392437508 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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