Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples.
Recently, parents' legal responsibility for their children's behavior has sparked an ongoing controversy. Some believe parents should be enquired by law to accept responsibility of their children's behavior. By contrast, others maintain that parents are not responsible in this regard. This essay will discuss why parents ought to be legitimately in charge of their children's conduct.
To begin with, this is parents' responsibility, in the first place, to educate their children properly to respect other people's rights, abide by rules, and tell the right from wrong. Parental supervision is a must and parents cannot abandon responsibility of appropriate upbringing to others, for example, educational system. When parents are legitimately compelled to bear the brunt of responsibility of their children, they would be more likely to nurture their children correctly in order not to suffer from legal consequences of their children's misbehavior.
On the other hand, when children understand that their parents will be disciplined by law due to their unintentional or willful conduct, without being involved in any wrong doing, they tend to obey the rules. This is especially the case when they once witness the result of their misbehavior is imposed on their parents; once bitten, twice shy. This will, in turn, drastically decreases crime rate in future because children are accustomed to obeying the rules from their childhood.
In conclusion, I believe that holding parents liable for their children's behavior urges parents to pay more attention to child rearing. Also, it encourages children to observe the law rules which all result in having good members of society in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47328244275 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94855171713 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576335877863 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2103110166 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.25397266985 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328065248104 0.242375264174 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145129167922 0.0925447433944 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755501020239 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221790590724 0.151781067708 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833403690068 0.0609392437508 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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