Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples.
Recently, parents' legal responsibility for their children's behavior has sparked an ongoing controversy. While some believe parents should be enquired by law to accept responsibility of their children's behavior, others maintain that parents are not responsible in this regard. This essay will discuss why parents ought to be legitimately in charge of their children's conduct.
To begin with, this is parents' responsibility, in the first place, to educate their children properly to respect other people's rights and bide by society rules and law. When parents are legitimately compelled to bear the brunt of responsibility of their children's behaviours, they would become even more careful about proper upbringing of their children in order not to suffer from legal consequences of their misbehavior.
On the other hand, when children understand their parents will be disciplined by law due to their aggressive and unlawful behaviours, be it unintentional or willful, they tend to behave to ensure their parents will not face problems because of them. This is especially the case when they once witness the result of their misbehavior is imposed on their parents; once bitten, twice shy. This will, in turn, drastically decreases crime rate in future because children are accustomed to obeying the rules from their childhood.
In conclusion, I believe that holding parents liable for their children's behavior urges parents to pay more attention to child rearing as well as encourages children to observe the regulation and law which both result in having good members of society in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.428 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90882519241 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5051939993 50.4703680194 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.777777778 104.977214359 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7777777778 20.9669160288 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4444444444 7.25397266985 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311210262455 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15750058375 0.0925447433944 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684322623411 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210307452942 0.151781067708 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072625237055 0.0609392437508 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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