People succeed because of their hard work; luck has nothing to do with success. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The way of being successful in life has become a controversial issue among the public all around the world. Although this topic and the ways of achieving it depends on hard work and a considerable number of settlers have this such a idea, others hold opponents view and believe that some chances might influnce on success. I am inclined to profoundly believe that hard-work is the one of the main features in success.
There are several reasons why hard work is advantageous and has a significant effects on our lives. It is crystal clear that there is a fierce competition in businesses and companies need to qualified employees. Employees are forced to work hard as possible as they can in order to remain their jobs. For instance, when companies face problems including financial ones, one of the factors that can address the problem is fire some of their workers. In this time, undoubtedly, the hard-working employees can make sure that probably they are not in this group.
On the one hand, there is no doubt chances might have some effects on every life. Namely, from my own experience when I was working after I graduated from university, I was invited to a meeting that includes some great businessmen and after during the meeting I was able to find some job opportunities among them. Therefore, after the meeting I called them and offer some ideas in order to create a prosperous future both for them and I.
In conclusion, while the way of gaining success is different, I strongly believe that this style of working has great effect on our lives and can provide us a wellthy future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rable number of settlers have this such a idea, others hold opponents view and be...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...k is advantageous and has a significant effects on our lives. It is crystal clear that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79061371841 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68925203897 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5559566787 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6593817277 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.583333333 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148382801562 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554096016478 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338122195778 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861516772728 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031247117787 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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