Pros and cons of this era as it is full of inventions. Discuss a invention.
There is rising debate on the inventions of this era because it can be harmful or beneficial to the society. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the invention with proper evidence from the society. In my stance, inventions are useful because they have brought ease in the life of human and it has become very important to learn the use of gadgets to make life easier with inventions.
For example, advancement in aeroplanes have made life of people easy as they can travel in air and able to cover the distance of kilometers in seconds. Similarly, mobile phone also has globalized the world and connected it into a closed system, that people from everywhere can now contact with their relatives to share their thoughts and feelings. But on the other side mobile phones have ruined the life of students and people. Students use smart phones as a tool of internet usage, for online study but then they got captured on other things like messages and videos.
To conclude, In my opinion the government of Austrailia is taking great intiaative to educate its people against the harmful effects of inventions because it all upto you either you use it in a good manner or in a wrong way. People are encourged to educate themselves for the proper use of gadgets and inventions. Citizens are encourged to follow rules and regulations to use inventions to bring prosperity, productivity, efficiency and positive attitude in the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a wrong way" with adverb for "wrong"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, similarly, so, then, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92276422764 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74443234871 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3366297821 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.1 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161669738596 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718941067541 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916676732523 0.071462118173 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118487425828 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110208785255 0.0609392437508 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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