Should parents be held legally
responsible for the actions of their children. Do you agree with this opinion?
Support your position with your own study, experience or observations
One of the most conspicuous trends in today's world is the colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that parents should be held legally responsible for what their kids do. There are a major number of factors that account to this belief. However, I do not totally agree this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a myriad of reasons in support of my stance. The most preponderant one is that parents cannot have complete control of their children no matter how much they keep their kids under observation. A child not only does things based on what parents teach but also learns a lot from the surrounding environment. Thanks to the aforementioned predicaments, the actions of a child not only impact other children but also creates an improper atmosphere.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that there are a number of folks who believe that parents should take the legal responsibility for the consequences of their children's actions. Neverthless, there will never be a holistic accountability on parents.
In view of arguments outlined above, one can conclude that parents need not be held completely accountable for their children's behaviour.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...plain why in this essay. There are a myriad of reasons in support of my stance. The...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 1207.87684729 83% => OK
No of words: 196.0 242.827586207 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13265306122 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97717962183 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602040816327 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 379.143842365 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9076681104 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 7.25397266985 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244618499711 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876983238854 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511302580074 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149093510893 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370258689836 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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