Smoking should be banned in all public places. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The discussion on smoking should be banned on public places is a debatable topic and people around the globe are divided in their opinions. The subject attracts of views from people and remains a hot topic and among people of concerns. In this essay, i will scrutinize my point of view by providing some relevant examples and explanation before drawing any conclusion.
To begin with, there are myriad of arguments in favor of my instances. The most preponderant one lies stems in the fact that some people don't accept that someone smoking near them. Moreover, smoking is very harmful as well as smoking by anybody in public places it result discriminate between masses and it is very dangerous for relationships. The most impeccable example i can quote here in the United States there government banned smoking because discrimination spreading rapidly between people due to smoking.
Probing further, another pivotal aspect that smoking is causes more diseases like lung cancer, mouth cancer and so on which is very harmful for people. As an illustration in the India there are some dangerous diseases spreading rapidly due to the smoking.
To conclude. after taking the above stated points into consideration, i am inclined to believe that smoking should be banned in all public places. It can be predicted that in the near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10454545455 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71397896421 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595454545455 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1473334971 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.090909091 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229461584586 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074342877774 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868591031409 0.071462118173 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138823427888 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909183380982 0.0609392437508 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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