Smoking should be banned in public place. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The importance of smoking should be banned in all public place which has always been datable, has now upsurged a lots of arguments in favor and against it, thus it has became even more controversial . the substantial influence smoking should be banned in all public place has sparked the controversy over the potential of this trends I an integral parts of the society in recent years . it can be agreed that upside of smoking should be banned in all public place in instrumental indeed , however it has some various drawbacks as well . this easy will be elaborate both assertion and will provide to a well weighted conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons . why because contains nicotine which causes cancer and lungs diseases . the most conspicuous one lies fact that smoking should be banned in all public place for instance . therefore , it is clearly vital time for people appreciate the significance of passive smoker can develop cancer of lungs mouth for the overall amelioration of society
However, there are some people, who choose to think differently and hold an apposing viewpoint , which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of smoking should be banned in all public place.
The above present dissertation illustrates agree perspective about the impact of smoking should be banned in all public place. While it is evident that is has various benefits ,although its deleterious effects cannot be ignored and have to be addressed and well balanced against its merits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15163934426 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72522120239 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561475409836 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.3610897368 50.4703680194 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.7 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.33497536946 469% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388737831676 0.242375264174 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173477425336 0.0925447433944 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126666889776 0.071462118173 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24367991741 0.151781067708 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912339345423 0.0609392437508 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.