In some countries, birth rate is slowing and the problem of aging population becomes more acute, what’s your view?
Nowadays, due to modernization and medical advancements, the gap between the number of birth rates and the number of the ageing population has increased. In any country, it has become common to have people beyond 65 years of age, and that means fewer people are of productive age. The trend of having slow birth rate and ageing population has created more serious problems in many countries. I am inclined towards the view that for any country the trend of fewer birth rates and the more aged population has more negatives than positives. This essay will discuss the drawbacks that this ageing trend is doing to any country.
Firstly, an increase in the ageing population means an increase in the non-working workforce. As the government needs to pay a pension to the retired government employees, these people are more of a liability to any country. For example, as per the recent survey conducted by a government institution, it has been revealed that due to increase in a number of aged people, the government needs to spend 40 per cent more money on the retired employee than it needs to spend 20 years back. Therefore, for a country, aged people are more liability than an asset.
Secondly, there is a huge amount of money spent on the medical expenses of old people in comparison to young people. Moreover, old people need special care and proper hospitals and old age homes are required for them. For instance, the government needs to invest 60 per cent more money in maintaining the infrastructure that suits old people.
As per the discussions outlined above, although due to an increase in age-old people get to spend more time with their family, for the government, the ageing population is more liability than an asset.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88851351351 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69981053024 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462837837838 0.580463131201 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1136828812 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.307692308 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245354450085 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106904123313 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108046400802 0.071462118173 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150505787947 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119106996007 0.0609392437508 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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