Over the past few decades, there has been a high degree of the ambivalence over this matter, whether the women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers or their role should be limited to household works. Whereas some people say that women role should be limited to house and children only, I sanguinely believe that women should be given the equal chance. This essay will further discuss reasons to support this notion and then deuce a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriads of reasons to support this notion, but one of the most compelling reason is that women are good at performing their jobs. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I conducted research which revealed that women's are better than men in managing office works. Thus, the beneficial ramification of women employee apparently can be seen.
On the contrary, skeptics conjecture that as the managing house and children are the primary responsibility of women, hence, they should not focus on work. Although it seems ostensibly veridical, this is the one-sided story. As a tangible example, research conducted by a reputed organization proves that women can manage the house and office effectively. Hence, It is correct to be presumed a preconceived notion of the skeptics.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments from both the sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of women doing the job far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the benefits of women doing work proves its significance, but also pinpoints implications arises if they do not work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, so, then, thus, whereas, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08301886792 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73594014162 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569811320755 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8893701844 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.25 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210191687292 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712876928962 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051460023197 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11627066156 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352837076795 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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