Some people argue that young people should concentrate on study or work. Some people think it is better to put energy in activities designed to broaden their experience, such as international travel and volunteering. Support with examples or cases.
Nowadays, whether traditionally working and studying or facing experiences that universities can’t offer are essential components of youngsters’ life has attracted controversies. Some people believe that having a steady job or getting accepted to a good college has beneficial effects on life and gaining a lucrative career, while others are in favor of letting young people experience different cultures and face doubts and dangers before choosing what to do with their life. As far as I am concerned, studying and working as soon as possible have more cons than pros due to the following reasons.
it is definitely paramount for youngsters to know exactly what they want to do with their future before starting to walk in that path. This is possible only when they see the world more clearly and gain more information about different career or research options.
However, if they want to be independent of their parents and be successful as soon as possible they have to attend college or university and be ahead of other competitors.
To sum up, I am more inclined to the view that governments should have a specific budget for teenagers to gain information and knowledge before choosing a subject in colleges.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 200.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.145 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91193664079 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 379.143842365 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6952348381 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 104.977214359 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 20.9669160288 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135335658883 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554906961327 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612768604174 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643269166038 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748488573527 0.0609392437508 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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