Some people believe that governments should pay for healthcare and education, but others disagree with this opinion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Few folks opine that the government needs to take the responsibility of medical and education facilities of the denizens whereas others disagree with this notion. This essay will discuss my views on the above notion.
If government provides free education to the people who are financially weak, they can become able to get a good job. Hence, supporting their family and providing better facilities to them. The cancer and many other fatal diseases are quite common these days and some people are not capable of receiving a better treatment due to lack of money. Thanks to the government as they offer some financial help to such people.
On the other hand, if government takes the responsibility of providing free education and medical facilities to everyone, it would result into a huge number of problems. The government will start to consume more taxes from the denizens. It will increase consumption of taxes from the citizens, thus, increasing financial burden on them. Maximum of citizens would leave their jobs. As they will easily get the chance to avail free basic needs. This will create a very bad impact on the young generation.
In conclusion, I believe that the government should reduce the price of education and health facilities for poor people, instead of providing it free.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mum of citizens would leave their jobs. As they will easily get the chance to avai...
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Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'frees'?
Suggestion: frees
...or poor people, instead of providing it free.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, thus, whereas, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09813084112 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66753677903 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588785046729 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3818823315 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9230769231 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172468144782 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571854840437 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495726956838 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114941218435 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493952186222 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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