Recently the freedom to work and live anywhere has become the main trend due to the development of communication technology and transportation.
Nowadays, people have more liberty to live, study, and work anywhere due to up-to-date advancements in technology of commuting and communication. However, this trend has some disadvantages too. This essay will discuss about merits and demerits of development in communication and travelling medium.
There are few reasons why expansion of commuting and transportation is advantageous. Firstly, due to the availability of public transport in each and every part of the world has made easier to travel. Due to this, people can now work and study at any place and come back home at the end of the day. Secondly, with the help of internet one can now work from home. He only needs a laptop and internet connection then he can converse with his colleagues and boss and complete their work by sitting at home. It also saves money as he does not have to pay transportation charges.
On the other hand such developments have some disadvantages too. Primarily, pollution has increased due to the facility of personal vehicles. People have more vehicles than the number of families just to show off their family status. As a result, pollution level has increased. Next to this, people are becoming lazy and travel to nearby places on vehicles. Consequently, they invite number of diseases such as obesity.
In conclusion, I believe that there are more disadvantages than advantages of advancements in communication and transportation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts in communication and transportation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18965517241 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12396237232 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3621371942 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.25 104.977214359 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.9669160288 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19067143512 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510218954094 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526784478402 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117865539959 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733839769102 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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