Some people believe that information technology has made the world a better place than before, whereas others content that it has brought more problems than solutions. What view do you agree with and why?
surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals that information technology has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. people have always been intrigued to analyse and explain the effect of information technology on our society. Regarding this, I would say this they have definitely brought myriad benefits.
one compelling argument in favor of my stance on this issue has to do with the fact that development in this sector has provide us with platform to connect with each other. Due to this, we can communicate with anyone sitting in some corner around the globe. As a result, this can help us running our own online easily with minimum effort. To put this into perspective, tech giants like facebook and whatsapp are currently dominating the online world. individual can have connect with near and dear ones as well as they can also chat with unknown individuals from different parts of the world.
Looking back at the introduction, one could also argue that information technology has lead to the development of different robotics gadget. These automatic machine can may replace human laborious work in the near future. also, they can be used to improve the artificial intelligence.
Hnece, based on the arguments above, we can conclude that information technology not only help in communicating with each other but also leads to the development of artifical intelligence in the near future. Therefore, I believe that this is surely a boon for the country.
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also, but, if, look, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, as to, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14230769231 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84037615227 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.327277645 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.33497536946 375% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142581657345 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488874291083 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299604957898 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835106668534 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298014716239 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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