Traffic congestion is increasing in major cities? What do you think is reason for this.
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people has changed more dramatically. A quick reflection of typical day reveals that traffic congestion has been one of the most prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. people have always intrigued to analyse and explain the reasons for increment in traffic in big cities. Regarding this, I would say it is mainly due to high number of vehicles and narrow roads.
one compelling argument in favor of my stance on this issue has to do with the fact that traffic problems is mainly due to increasing owners of private transportation. Every individual is opting for his own private vehicle. As a result, people are finding more comfort in using their private source of transportation, which ultimately leads crowd traffic.
Looking back to the introduction, one could also argue that establishment of ancient narrow roads is also a very big cause of rise in traffic. this is because, some road construction were designed according to ancient world, when transport vehicles were very rare. As a case in point, in London, ancient towns have been modernized into new world. therefore, it has resulted in the rapid increase in transportation but the roads are still narrow and poorly established, which has resulted in a great rise in traffic problems.
Hence, based on the arguments above we can conclude that the main reason for traffic congestion is not only increase in transportation vehicles but also the use of old built roads. therefore, I believe that increasing traffic is mainly due to easy affordability of personal vehicles and poor established roads.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, regarding, so, still, therefore, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13059701493 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93328914882 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578358208955 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.862289706 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.769230769 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216300241259 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728068380048 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566429487219 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133189410176 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423337787925 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.