Why can some people not balance their personal and professional life? How do you think we can balance them?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people has changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals importance of balanced life has always been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. people have always intrigued to analyse and explain the reason for having balance between personal and professional life. regarding this, I believe that it is happening mainly due to high workload and family responsibilities and it can be solved by adopting the measures mentioned in this essay.
there are several reasons for disbalance between the two's life. First of all, in the contemporary world, there is a rapid increase in competition among each other. people are working hard to earn their bread and butter and also, they don't want their colleagues to perform better than them that force them put extra hours of work towards their respective goals. Another reason is that, nowadays, people are only opting for monetary needs rather than giving a piece of their valuable time to their family members.
However, there are various steps we could take to tackle these problems. Firstly, individual should not compare his life with others and should be focused on their own goals. Furthermore, they should not considered their colleagues as their competitors and should pull them down like a crabs. Secondly, they should make a proper schedule regarding allotment of proper time to their family members. So, they can also acquire the love and care they are expecting from a individual.
Hence based on the above arguments, I want to stress that this issue arsing mainly due to improper time management between personal and professional life. Nonetheless, we could certainly implement a set of measures mentioned in this essay to mitigate them in a timely manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, nonetheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 20.9802955665 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14527027027 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68083850458 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591216216216 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5016894586 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.533333333 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246847804144 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701642174585 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455157861243 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13464823526 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361668499351 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.