Communication has evolved significantly over the last decade. Discuss pros and cons of development of communication.
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people has changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals communication has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. people have always some conflicting opinions about this. this essay looks both sides of the argument.
Undeniably, development in communication has immensely dwindled the communication gap. this is because, online social platforms like facebook and whatsapp helps us to contact with our near and dear ones all around the world. Furthermore, it helps us in meeting different individuals around the world and share social cultures with each other.
however, there is no doubt that advancement in communication has made ourselves prone to different threats. people are trying to make connections with unknown individuals and share their privacy with them, and if the commuter turned out to be hacker will put the user in trouble. As a case in this point, terrorists group can attack your profile and may extract some useful information , which might be used by them in committing different crimes in the name of innocent people.
In conclusion, we cannot deny that development in communication field has raised a question for the questions for daily users. however, in my opinion, this has lead to development of information technology and helped us to communicate with anyone within a flick of seconds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2850877193 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99777127157 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65350877193 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4718043726 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.416666667 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.086863642473 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037055659385 0.0925447433944 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550140195396 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549462450208 0.151781067708 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366333119211 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.