Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You should write 200-300 words.
It is an undeniable fact that from the beginning of civilization punishing individuals for the crime they have committed has been accepted. Some believe having a strict law might discourage and mitigate crime from society, while others oppose to that notion. I support the latter and this essay will highlight some of both the aspects of law in human in human and deduce to a reasonable conclusion.
To begin with, faith in law comes from the beginning of civilization. Centuries ago, strict law, prohibited people to commit crime and were bounded to construct a better society. Crime rates in Dubai, for instance, are minimum because of the strict law.
While people on the other side of the fence assert that human behavior is not dependent on rules and regulations of country. In spite of all the hard punishment and strict laws, encouraging people and making them aware of the crime they have committed in a positive way would be helpful. Moreover, human attitude is something that cannot be changed by harsh punishment; instead it needs encouragement and support.
To recapitulate, punishing individual for the crime they have committed is a genuine solution; however , punishment should fit the crime and programs encouraging prisoners to adjust in the society in a better ways should needs to be encouraged and implemented.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 343, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'in human'.
Suggestion: in human
...ghlight some of both the aspects of law in human in human and deduce to a reasonable conclusion. ...
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Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... aware of the crime they have committed in a positive way would be helpful. Moreover, human attit...
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Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...committed is a genuine solution; however , punishment should fit the crime and pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so, while, for instance, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15137614679 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84701640096 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577981651376 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5960472764 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.3 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129126567794 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557148563976 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328553412084 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800110626045 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147215209229 0.0609392437508 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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