Some people prefer to spend their holidays in resorts where everything is organized for them and they take little interest in the country they are visiting. Others prefer to travel around the country and to see how the people live, to get to know their customs and traditions and cuisine.
Holidays are a prominent part of human life, but it remains unsolved that what is the best way to utilize them. While some people think that holidays are more about gaining pleasure and spending memorable time with family in a well-known resort, other believe that holidays must be spend traveling around the world to explore unknown. This essay will discuss how people should spend their holidays from a traveler and a visitor perspective with an example.
To begin with, people are having exceptional time with their family by spending holidays at a popular resort where everything is spot on. This case is conflict for those travelers who want travel around the world for an adventure. For example, researchers suggested that people need indulgence in life by traveling with their family to relax and feel happiness, which is very important to reduce daily life stress.
On the other hand, some people prefer to travel for learning various culture and cuisine around the country. In addition, travelers can spend a great deal of time to learn about other countries traditions, customs, and cuisines, which will help them to increase and improve their knowledge, more opportunities and self-satisfaction. This particular way can have rich benefits for example, they also can share their knowledge with others.
In conclusion, everyone has different perspective about how they should spend their holidays. In my opinion, people have dissimilar emphasize about their leisure time, but the main fact is that holidays must be enjoyable and discrete from daily life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25099601594 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63515023512 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581673306773 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4688645428 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.818181818 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7272727273 7.25397266985 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365392461175 0.242375264174 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142004534108 0.0925447433944 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541688115697 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222550079445 0.151781067708 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349618746656 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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