Some people prefer to spend their holidays in resorts where everything is organized for them and they take little interest in the country they are visiting. Others prefer to travel around the country and to see how the people live, to get to know their customs and traditions and cuisine. Write an essay on which type of foreign travel you think is best?
More and more people like to spend their vacation in several ways such as reading novels; meet colleagues and gardening whilst most of them choose travel is the way of reduce their stereo tropical life style. However, some travelers would like to spend holidays in cottage or resort but some others like to travel around the city and like to learn how these dwellers live, their culture and life style. This essay will discuss why tourists will select both types of travels and benefits of traveling around the city.
Travelling is the way of changing human mentality. Thus, they are choosing to travel different climate, culture and life style because they need to released stress or problems without their sedentary life style. On the other hand travelers can get massive experience with multi -cultural communities whilst they can learn about different language and tradition. As a result of this type of travelers can be enjoy their vacation without any hesitation because they are always in curiosity with new experiences.
Some people were preferred their vacation in cottage, restaurant or resort. These people can’t get experience of different communities because they want to live alone without visiting. They are spending their whole vacation in different restaurants without any exercise or tasting different cuisines. As a result of this type of travelers can spend their leisure time without novel experience.
In the present, travel is the most prevalent way of changing human’s inactive life style but planning of vacation is different from person to person. In my opinion, travelers can get more advantages in travel around world rather than some others spend their vacations in cottage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to travel'
Suggestion: to travel
...nd gardening whilst most of them choose travel is the way of reduce their stereo tropi...
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Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...exercise or tasting different cuisines. As a result of this type of travelers can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, well, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28832116788 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53775634304 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518248175182 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8297855767 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.461538462 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303797535021 0.242375264174 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124318937851 0.0925447433944 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681661973706 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197994585562 0.151781067708 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540219446576 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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