SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT EXCERCISE IS THE KEY TO HEALTH WHILE OTHERS FEEL THAT HAVING A BALANCE DIET IS MORE IMPORTANT.DISCUS THE BOTH THE SIDES AND GIVR YOU OPINION

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SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT EXCERCISE IS THE KEY TO HEALTH WHILE OTHERS FEEL THAT HAVING A BALANCE DIET IS MORE IMPORTANT.DISCUS THE BOTH THE SIDES AND GIVR YOU OPINION

AS MY OPINION,WE FIND THAT NEITHER EXCERCISE NOR DIETING BOTH are very IMPORTANT.PEOPLE SHOULD NOT SEPERATE EXECISE OR DIETING BECAUSE BOTH ARE HELPING

PHYSICALLY AND MENTALLY TO BE FIT,AND MAKE THEM STRONG.

FRISTLY EXCERCISE IS NOT ONLY TO REDUCE YOUR FAT THEY RELAX YOUR MIND FROM STRESS.WHILE EXCERCISING,ALTERNATIVLY BREATHING PART IS COMPELSARY SO WE CAN FEEL LESS IN STRESS.

30 MINUTES OF EXCERCISE IS NECASARRY PER DAY WHICH REMOVES [BAD FAT] THROUGH SWEAT,THER ARE TWO TYPES OF FATS THEY ARE SATURATED AND UNSATURATED FAT WHICH REMAINS IN YOUR BODY WHEREAS

SATURATED FAT IS LESS IN DIETRY WHICH MAKES YOU LAZY.SO THROUGH EXERCISE THEY ARE BEEN REMOVED,BEEN HEALTHY.WE HAVE MANY TYPES OF EXCERCISE THEY ARE FLOOR EXCERCISE,CARDIO,JOGGING,ETC....

ADDITIONALLY EXCERCISE KEEPS YOU FIT WHEREAS HAVING AN BALANCE DIET IS MORE IMPORTANT.FIVE TIMES PER DAY INTAKE OF YOUR DIET MEAL IS NECESARRY,MORE YOU EAT BOILED VEGETABLES

GIVES YOUR SKIN GLOW AND PROTINE FOODS ARE VERY MANDITARY FOR AN DIET. FOR EG: EGG WHITES,BOILED CHICKEN, ETC... GOOD FATS ARE ALSO TAKES PART IN DIET THEY ARE LIKE CHASHEWS,

PEANUTS...THEY ARE HIGHER IN VITAMINES AND MINERALS WHICH WILL INCREASE YOUR METOBOLISM IN YOUR BODY TO BE HEALTHY AND FIT

TO CONCLUDE,WE FIND THAT BOTH ARE IMPORTANT IN OUR DAILY LIFE WHICH SUPPORTS YOU TO BE HEALTHY AND FIT.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , WE
AS MY OPINION,WE FIND THAT NEITHER EXCERCISE NOR DIETING...
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...ING PHYSICALLY AND MENTALLY TO BE FIT,AND MAKE THEM STRONG. FRISTLY EXCER...
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... YOUR MIND FROM STRESS.WHILE EXCERCISING,ALTERNATIVLY BREATHING PART IS COMPELSARY SO WE CAN ...
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...AY WHICH REMOVES [BAD FAT] THROUGH SWEAT,THER ARE TWO TYPES OF FATS THEY ARE SATURATE...
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...O THROUGH EXERCISE THEY ARE BEEN REMOVED,BEEN HEALTHY.WE HAVE MANY TYPES OF EXCERCISE...
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...ES OF EXCERCISE THEY ARE FLOOR EXCERCISE,CARDIO,JOGGING,ETC.... ADDITIONALLY EX...
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... THEY ARE FLOOR EXCERCISE,CARDIO,JOGGING,ETC.... ADDITIONALLY EXCERCISE KEEP...
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...XCERCISE,CARDIO,JOGGING,ETC.... ADDITIONALLY EXCERCISE KEEPS YOU FIT WHEREAS HAVING ...
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...AY INTAKE OF YOUR DIET MEAL IS NECESARRY,MORE YOU EAT BOILED VEGETABLES GIVES YOUR ...
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...ANDITARY FOR AN DIET. FOR EG: EGG WHITES,BOILED CHICKEN, ETC... GOOD FATS ARE ALSO TAKE...
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...O BE HEALTHY AND FIT TO CONCLUDE,WE FIND THAT BOTH ARE IMPORTANT IN OUR DAI...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.5418719212 209% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43661971831 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.61321825544 2.71678728327 133% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.5024630542 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.72024339 50.4703680194 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 193.0 104.977214359 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.5 20.9669160288 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.12807881773 218% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182717882965 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911353614963 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786102238794 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08009634868 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886847883717 0.0609392437508 146% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 12.6369458128 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 53.1260098522 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.9458128079 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.32886699507 124% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.94827586207 196% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.3980295567 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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