Recently, the phenomenon of spending the leisure times with mind developer activities and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that giving the mind a rest in leisure time cannot be highly beneficial, such an issue is regarded as thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that thinking about mind's resting or activity depends on the job situation, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to dismiss giving the mind a long rest or event lower activity. At first, taking a lot of activities of minds could make minds exhausted and less performance. However, a mind without activity might involve important problems in the future. For example, there are many mental diseases causing by lower mental activity rates.
In addition, a good rest in leisure time could help people with jobs in high mind activities such as chess athletes. But the human mind needs to work in high rates to be always in a healthy condition. For instance, a recent scientific research undertaken by a reputable university has shown that a significant number of scientists recommended people for more mental works such as reading and doing crossword puzzles to prevent some mental diseases in elderly such as Alzheimer.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this topic, I profoundly believe that the drawbacks of a tired mind far outweighed of a mind with lower activity and more resting time. Not only for mental disorders, but also for body reactions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12927756654 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82373092152 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585551330798 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4871097818 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.416666667 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.25397266985 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394747337081 0.242375264174 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13500131999 0.0925447433944 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683955000492 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228785715164 0.151781067708 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526901740055 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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