Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals keeping pets at home has been one of the prominent topics in contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Regarding this I would say to my viewpoints in upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, pets are very protective of their loved and caretakers. They easily developed strong bonds of love and care for people who show them love. In the case of a child, a pet always looks out for them, even in the absence of guardian. Pets are more faithful then human beings themselves. Unlike people who have greed and hate towards ones the close to them, animals harbor no such malice.
On the other hand, some pets are good and some are dangerous like pit-bull, American bully and so on. So the keeping pets is not good for children while others thing is dangerous I think keeping dog is not good at homes.
nutshell, I am agreed and disagreed with this statement keeping pets are dangerous for children but some pets are faithful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nutshell
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, regarding, so, then, while, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 1207.87684729 82% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74038461538 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48022877237 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581730769231 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 379.143842365 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1050229309 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.1666666667 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366740004101 0.242375264174 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130035920965 0.0925447433944 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140978767673 0.071462118173 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241891087836 0.151781067708 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102543299966 0.0609392437508 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 12.6369458128 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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