Technological access to online music should be free or paid. What do you think?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals that technological access to online music should be free or paid has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain this nation regarding this I would like to say that in recent years, due to advancement in technology, there has been a colossal in the trend to see discussing the value of online music in terms of money.
Firstly, on the one hand I would like to say that there are many arguments which could be attributed towards making the music available online for free. The most conspicuous one is that artists already receive the hefty amount in the form of royalties and licensing fees for their music albums.
Secondly, on the other hand, I would like to say that the composers should help many struggling singers who struggled in their life and composes to learn from pre record music. Composers should provide motivation to musicians and singers. People take free source as granted and show adequate respect to composers.
Before putting my pen down I would like to say that analyze the aforementioned statement .According to me online music should be paid due to resource and people use to limit the online sources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89082969432 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64182395432 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576419213974 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.6023862311 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.444444444 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269909407043 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110608794696 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108539279555 0.071462118173 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15884960885 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483154725001 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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