Some people think law changes human behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of Law’s implementation and it’s the corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the application of the law is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded through both positive and constructive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that rule of law can be a plus and I will analyse that throughout this essay.
From a social point of view, the law can provide the society with noticeable effect, which is rooted in the fact that law, as well as it’s benefits of implication, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a University student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered more obedient society. Thus, beneficial verification of laws on human behaviour can be seen.
Within the realm of human psychology, the strict law might increase the consequences of rebel society. Moreover, the fundamental aspect of heavy penalties related to this reality that demerits of law pertain to abuse of the system. As a tangible example, scientific research undertook by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of the effect of the law on human psychology is correlated negatively with financial losses. Hence, it is correct to presume that preconceived notion of improving the behaviour of a human with the rule of law.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of laws on human behaviour outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of good society prove the significance of laws on human behaviour, but also pinpoint society prosperity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3045112782 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15282667072 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597744360902 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1481339132 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.583333333 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226532757719 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088703995126 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057989807637 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140623091422 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532289751058 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 55.0591133005 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.