some universities now offer degree course related to popular culture such as pop music and video gaming. some people think these subjects are valid. what is your opinion. Give some examples.
The importance of some universities now offer degree course related to popular culture such as pop music and video gaming which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that some universities many facilities provide for all students for example offer degree course related to popular cultures such as pop music and video gaming. Consequently, some people think these subjects are valid. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that mostly people not interested only study for example students like within activities of study. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effects is that mostly students participate pop music and video gaming. Besides, universities provide more facilities for students. Hence, it is apparent why many are favor of this trend.
According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of some universities now offer degree course related to popular cultures such as pop music and video gaming are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, hence, so, thus, while, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22692307692 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66674402008 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526923076923 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.4553016001 50.4703680194 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.25 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419885081443 0.242375264174 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14905771887 0.0925447433944 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163746570098 0.071462118173 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275337959338 0.151781067708 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10341065878 0.0609392437508 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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