Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can we reduce it?
Recently, a phenomenon of stress and its corresponding impact has sparked an ongoing debate, which inevitably leads to a moot question, what are the reason behind increase in stress level? In this essay the topic will be examined with related examples and solutions.
From the social standpoint, In contrast to the past, there's a race to be the best in every field, such as education and work.
In order to prove ourselves as the best, we are stressing ourselves by working really hard and for long hours. Even when companies advert for job interview, for a single job, there are hundreds of applicants and this stress them out. According to my own experience, when I was a university student I performed an experiment which discovered that among the multinational company employees, about 75% of them agreed to have gone through stress and anxiousness in order to fulfil their targets.
Within the realm of Mind, although it is inevitable to be stressed in the current competitive situation, one has to develop our own strategies to be distracted from these influences . Moreover, fundamental aspects of solution pertain stress is to keep up proper work-life balance. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by some prestigious university asserted that exercising regularly releases endorphins in the body, which reduces stress. Nonetheless, adequate sleep and spending quality time with family and friends will bring happiness in life.
To conclude, although it is difficult to avoid being stressed in this modern world, one has to focus on both family and work equally to cope with the pressure at work. However, it is recommended that Government should start Government funded Meditation Centres and stress clinics.
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Suggestion: there's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, nonetheless, really, so, as to, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25448028674 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88737575932 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652329749104 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1262545783 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.166666667 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198478491011 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668928582601 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427845268521 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976527652892 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503833944343 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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