Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can we reduce it?
one of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is the colossal upsurge in the stress. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in the society. In my opinion, stress has more negative impacts than positives in the society.
On the one hand, critics may point out that one of the most significant benefit of the stress is the more focus towards work. For example, the managers, unlike in the past, now have achieved good work results in time, as they used to go taking time with less effort, thanks to competition being held in every field at this 21st century.
On the other hand, there are several arguments in favour of my stance. One of the most preponderant ones is that high stress has negative consequences for human kind in various ways. Firstly, people are having very limited friends to hang or share feeling with, such as in metro cities people even don’t know one living next door. According to “Times Magazine December 2017 edition”, the proportion of Australians with stress in their life have dropped from 30 percent to 10 percent today. Secondly, a large portion of stress rate increasing worldwide because of high unemployment.
Lastly, in my opinion, the government of Australia is taking great initiatives in educating it’s citizens against the negative impacts of stress. Citizens are being encouraged to spend lot of time with family and friends, to compensate their stress full life.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite having some benefits, the drawbacks of stress in the society are indeed too dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 31.9359605911 163% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01459854015 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66176267782 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605839416058 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7247929082 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.692307692 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159813708484 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059248187609 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385946522143 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983883693929 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332327433701 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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